MALL TRIP ADVENTURE

by PizzaSnake313

Tags: RPG

Description

You are out shopping with your friends Kathy and Daniel. Can you survive the situations you find yourselves in?

PS. Please note of any links that have no destination in the comments. This is my very first game, It's a bit short..But i hope you all like it.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 5 - aren't you a little to old to be trick or treating
Story Difficulty: 2 - walk in the park
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 2 - good ... for you to poop on (based on 14 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 94 times and finished 18 times since 2/22/2012

Comments

I think I got the best ending

-- betaband
5/4/2012 2:16:51 PM:

too short it could be better if you add more choices like when you decide everyone should shop by themselfs you could add choices to goto some of the shops in the mall

-- ZenUndead
2/24/2012 11:34:37 AM:

tee hee

-- betaband
2/23/2012 8:45:28 PM:

On the upside, your spelling and grammar was a-ok! Your links worked, and there was a good array of choices to make at any one time.

On the downside, the story itself was uninteresting and rather mediocre in its writing.

-- Doodled
2/23/2012 8:07:22 PM:

Thank you all for your feedback, i agree it was a lame story--I made this story as a test to make sure it would not turn out TOO crappy. I was never good at writing stories and probably never will be, hopefully my others will turn out better, Thank you all for your honesty!

-- PizzaSnake313
2/22/2012 4:19:17 PM:

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